Beautiful, as is your new moniker, ShiningStar. Very well done.

Oops, just read your profile and confused you for the other Trafalmadorian. Welcome to Ficlets!

yeah that is my proginy how you feel about that]

oh nugget face but mouth turd eater head that is a good poem and sweet too but look just stomp on your toe really hard and you’ll cry it works for me

I know exactly how it feels to not be able to shed tears… it makes me feel so horrible sometimes…

Good poem. IMHO , this is a poem that could be given more depth with moderistic spacing, similar to ee cummings’ i have found what you are like
@ mighty joe… “nugget face but mouth turd eater head” That’s an amazing line, I’m going to have to use it on my girlfriend. :P

That is my pet name for my daughter it really is a term of endearment

@anna u see you changed your pen are you trying to make me pull out my dr seuss meets archie bunker hat lol

i meant to say i see you changer your pic what is wrong with me?(beating mt head like dobie from potter and company)

changed i meant(more self punishment) i gotta drink less or more when i post i am really having trouble with the typos when i am sober.lol

umm , i thought you just plucked a pube when you kneaded a tear…it’s amazing to me that your progeny is clearly an erudite young woman, this is scary !

Not to slight the writer , this is a lovely piece.I’m sure you don’t remember me , eden , i’m one of your dad;s crazy ass friends and the last time i saw you , you were a toddler , so to fine that you’re a grown , eloquent young lady is wonderful and makes me feel SUPER old…

first of all @ chaka who has pubes? and second drag queens dont get old they just move down to javier’s

Very strange string of comments… but the poem itself is awesome and sounds like me sometimes.

when the author was five i made her memorize where the side walk ends(the book not the poem) so she could recite when the cable went out

so far that’s one of the best uses for offspring i’ve heard , you should’ve taught her the raven and “who’s on first” while you were at it

No slight to the author, i doubt she remembers me cuzs she was a toddler and i was just one of her dad’s crazy ass friends, but , eden it’s incredible that yopu are now clearly such an eloquent young woman-also this makes me feel OLDER THAN DIRT – but whatever you’re awesome

oops i repeated myself (kind of) its kinda late and i’m punchy

hey eddie jo shouldn’t you hassle your daughter to put up a pic? you’re real good at that you know…

yeah, she needs a pic. I’m tired of all the new people stealing mine :P

man they are always janking kru(l)ltars pic wh o is the kid like kevin’s kid or something

oh yeah eden put up a new pic quit stealing krulltar’s

it’s funny how that’s exactly how i felt not too long ago and this would have taken the words right out of my mouth at a few moments in time..

but now i’ve found what i want in life, and that feeling is gone =)

nice..