Oh no!!! How’s Jameson gonna talk to her!!! Hurry Jamesy!!! or ill KILL YOU myself =)

prandi noooo

i agree with bart

Arranged marriages, interesting characters, great dialog. What’s not to like. Nicely done.

i ditto all the above… including the killing part. lol.
I am DYING for the sequel. TBS , please, put me out of my misery… backs away from drawn sword Um… that’s not what I meant TBS … I meant sequel.
Haha, sorry, that was a really weird comment wasn’t it?
Anyways, I loved this sequel, and how it really puts you into Prandi’s shoes and what she was (not) thinking.
LoA

I love this glimpse into Prandi’s world. The detail of her need for order is fantastic and her obedience being what causes her to miss his call is tragic. Oh, and by the way, you’ve got sequel.

I truely have nothing funny or serious to comment on. This ficlet left me emotionally drained. both you and TBS have created characters I have come to relate with. My heart cries out for Prandi. Well done.