I think this is the longest sentence….
I think I’m the only one who hasn’t cheated on that rule. =dies= anyway, longest sentence ever… why is he shivering?
I didn’t cheat! lol, very long and GOOD sentence!LoA
@mask.This is Prose Poetry so no rules apply here. And he is shivering because he was in a trance and time flew by like probation appointments and before he new it the morning dew had settled on him as the sun rose.
@ Mask, so go ahead and do another sequel! You’ve earned it.Elsha, this is beautiful. So much imagery in just one sentence.
Amazing imagery. It’s such a lonely scene, both sad and hopeful.
My kind of sentence! Really well done.
Thanks everyone!
Oops, I’ve cheated again! You’ve got sequel. ;)
Ha, everyone that has cheated, more power to you! I love this Elsha! and who cares if it’s the longest?!
lol lets all cheat we can’t help it!!!
Ah. I must agree with everyone above. This is awesome. It’s so strange how you can make such a sad scene so beautiful and hopeful!
Ah. I must agree with everyone above.
This is awesome. It’s so strange how you can make such a sad scene so beautiful and hopeful!
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