Making out, double agents, and guns in churches? Yeah, I’d say it’s pretty corrupt. I like that the lovely Latina woman now has a name.
My only critique is that in an earlier ficlet, you had Helena running out into the street, and now the two are back in the cathedral. A minor detail that doesn’t really upset the flow, but it had me a bit confused.

Good point. Duly noted!

Sweet! I want to sequel, but I’m not sure who’s on which side at the moment… And sorry for turning your nice ficlet about a cathedral into Yet Another Spy Story. : ) But hey, at least this one’s got religion.

I have no idea who anybody is anymore. But it’s kind of fun that way. It could still be anyone’s game. And I’m assuming Ana went back and made an edit to fix the location error wall.doll pointed out.

I feel like I may have crossed a line or two, as I’m in a prudish mood, but you’ve got sequel, darlin.

heh, classic boyfriend line to evade capture. :)

The plot thickens to the consistancy of peanut butter. I love it!