Haha. Sounds like half the men in my family. Well written, captures the redneck spirit well.

i agree, very well written! i extraspecially like the line “peppered across his milky-white teeth”.
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Ah, you’ve captured rural life so well. Still, not like I want to go back for a visit, but it’s very well written. Reminds me high school and finding the discarded plugs of ‘chaw’ in the drinking fountains.