I love it! Aside from a few continuity errors, it’s great! But, see, there’s a rub. I do have a vision for this story that I really need to continue on my own. I wish sequeling around stuff like this didn’t make me feel like such a jerk! Tell you what, let’s write a collaborative series together when I get done with this one, deal? :-)

You’re not a jerk at all, so don’t feel like one. It was fun writing in a vein I normally don’t use. :)