Really heart-breakingly tragic in the beginning and then sort of a funny/sad/fitting end to it all.
Very tragic, yeah, but then I was rooting for Jr. at the end. That dad is definitely a diabolical villain.
Yes, I hate the dad. And I can only see bad things in the future for Junior. Very good (though it feels weird to say that ;) ) story. Great job on bringing out the villians.
That’s one f*ed up Dad.
The dad is definitely an a**hole, but the kid is catching on quickly.
ok i its official i hate him
I love how his name is Edward Jr. Definitely someone unpleasant and villain-like.
I love how his name is Edward Jr.
Definitely someone unpleasant and villain-like.
I, personall, think the father is just misunderstood. His son obviusly stole from a shop, and the father feels that he has to degrade him vocally to get it through his head to never do it again. By the way, the dads a punk.
I, personall, think the father is just misunderstood.
His son obviusly stole from a shop, and the father feels that he has to degrade him vocally to get it through his head to never do it again.
By the way, the dads a punk.
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