aww!! i like this a lot =) keep this going or imma..or i will not give you a cookie!!!

(haha i know imma dork. no need to say it)

aww!! i like this a lot =) keep this going or imma..or i will not give you a cookie!!!

(haha i know imma dork. no need to say it)

I like this entire story, except for one line… “I am a woman of few words,” sounds a little too clever for this particular moment. Let Sean lead the conversation a bit more.

“Nice tom meet you Sara, I’m Sean.â€?
You should clean this line up a bit. Other than that, a great little story.
keep it up. I’m curious as to what will happen. :)