Awesome Villain. Vampires make the best villains and nazi’s, he seems a modern day vampire, and if im reading correctly he’s gay..nice twist on the genre. he’s menacing, I hope you sequel it and it becomes a series.
Awesome Villain. Vampires make the best villains and nazi’s he seems a modern day vampire, and if im reading correctly he’s gay..nice twist on the genre. he’s menacing, I hopeyou sequel it and it becomes a series.
Awesome Villain. Vampires make the best villains and nazi’s he seems a modern day vampire, and if im reading correctly he’s gay..nice twist on the genre. he’s menacing, I hopeyou sequel it and it becomes a series.
Awesome Villain. Vampires make the best villains and nazi’s, he seems a modern day vampire, and if im reading correctly he’s gay..nice twist on the genre. he’s menacing, I hopeyou sequel it and it becomes a series.
Awesome Villain. Vampires make the best villains and nazi’s, he seems a modern day vampire, and if im reading correctly he’s gay..nice twist on the genre. he’s menacing, I hope you sequel it and it becomes a series.
Either gay or just opportunistic perhaps. Carefully written with a nice pace. I thought the last line was a nice nod to the counter-point to his villainy, that this is what he must do to survive, like any natural predator.
He doesn’t seem diabolical, and the description of the guy as “Eurasian” really threw me off. He looks… Asian? European? Possibly Middle-Eastern? Everything else was good.
(Sorry I’m extremely late in my commenting…) This has nice pace, and contrary to what some were saying I get that he has potential to do something extemely diabolically evil. Well done! Thanks for entering!
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