Great details in this one, makes it feel very immediate and real. Working on a sequel now…

You’ve got sequel. =)

Very detailed, you kept the pace flowing well, great sequel in keeping with Ana’s conecpt.

A merciful Death. Very intriguing, I like the multi-faceted personality. :)

Dang, this is heart-wrenching. I couldn’t imagine Death had feeling, but I guess he does… hmm…

Great sequel. I think you captured Ana’s “Jeff” well. The flow was great.

“I searched his eyes for a reason. Even in death it’s sometimes there, and just a flicker can be enough for me to let someone have another go.” This really did capture Ana’s Jeff.