Eckhouse, sequel away if you like. I’ll be back later.

She’s next she saw him.. shes gonna kill herself.. edge of my seat reading here. Ana, youve outdone urself.

No matter who sequels, you sequel back keeping control of your original character’s attitude and balance with beautiful prose and great details! As always, I’m impressed!

I hope you don’t mind my sequel.

I like how Death describes people’s souls depending on how much life they have lived. The old woman’s soul was “light and feathery”, while Andre’s in “heavy with days unlived”. I’m really digging how perceptive and introspective you have made Death. It’s very thought-provoking and touching at times.

I agree with [ wall.doll ] death’s perspective on life is quite brilliant. I’m also unnerved by the fact that she stared straight at the reaper. Does it mean she’s next or is there something else going on here? Great work, as usual!