That was a sweet ending! Please capitalize your i’s, and maybe spiff up the first half, but otherwise, it was okay.

hahahahhahahaha.
i noticed something really funny (to me, at least).
they’re at lunch…
…and the teacher’s name is Mrs. Rice!!
XD
=]
P.S. i apologize for my dorky sense of humor!=]

hahahaha thats ok, ima dork too so its all good. that is actually pretty funny =P