Love the last sentence. Very suspenseful little fic. You misspelled “beautiful” in your first line, FYI .

eyes wide Wow. That’s all I can say.
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The end blowing out the candles, and leaving the rest to our imagination.. Chilling.

great last line! And very gory! Interesting choice of Italian, too!

Ya .. i like the darkness in this. You can feel the fear of the victims.. nicely done.

spooky sneaky creepy and like four more better words that end y. i dig it 4 stars

Salem’s Lot if the vampire (Bartlow?) was a cat. Awesome Ficlet!

Very awesomely done!

All I can say is that is soo cool!!!!

The missing spaces threw me a bit, but not enough to not give it 5 stars. The last line shows the beasts malice.

That was awesome!

And the cliff-hanger of an ending was great.

om effin G!