Beautiful development!
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I sort of got a geeks out to get revenge on hookers they thought they loved vibe from this one. maybe she (the target) was his girl as part of a sorority dare??
I guess because he’s puncturing her tires, which seems kind of geeky.
Loved the use of italics as The Voice. I think The Voice is the real villain here, shown in the control of the weaker human male character.

It’s more like the guy thinks he’s been wronged by the girl, but he’s more wreaking revenge on society. I don’t know whose tires he’s slashing, but it could get worse from there.

Ahh…nothing like a little insanity to spice up your life!

All villains have to start somewhere!

just think if son of sam had succeeded at killing the neighbors dog we wouldnt know david berkowitz @ pyro

I agree that the voice is the real villain. Or maybe the girl is a little villainous, too?