I love the build up to the last paragraph, by telling us the history of suicide attempts and the unsure cause of the mood. And then the cell phone search, hoping for the call of all calls. :)
Thanks for the sequel, you really took it in a direction I like… and it strangely depicts exactly what I was looking for… BB’s gonna sequel mine too, so it’ll be like a double series from one ficlet maybe. Cool =P
Mistress Elsha Hawk
Bartimaeus
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