The two sections separated by the extended ellipses seem a bit disjointed. Is Hannah the narrator in the first section? I really liked the first part, but the second part needs an extra sentence or two to help link them both.

Thanks, I needed someone to tell me if it was clear or not because I wasn’t sure. I’ll fix that.

I definitely liked it. I don’t know what changes you have or haven’t made since Ana’s comment, but I think everything makes sense as the story now stands.

Yea, I like it too. The beginning was awesome. Very well written.

Amazing.

I really liked this. So sad, and very well written.