Interesting story. Very open to sequel.

Nice ending. It definitely piques my attention as to what, exactly, is going on.

Nice work.

well, that shadow has something important up its “sleeve”. (this is very different from the Death pieces you have been working on) Great sequel! I hope this keeps going!

Little flavor of ‘Peter Pan’ with the unruly shadow, but also a balance between her incredulity and the bizarre reality of the situation. I may have to dub you the new Queen of Playing Nice with Others.

A sequel, written it has.