Sounds like a diary of a preteen.

stagnant.
good word, considering i haven’t heard it before.=]
a lot of emotion in a short couple of lines.
=]

this comment is my opinion , so take it with a grain of salt. I feel that the last sentence should be changed to present tense, and should read “I am scared.” It would make it more emotionally dramatic.

One Time, One Change: Thanks. :D

Krulltar: I was thinking about that for a while. But if you read the title and the tags again after reading the piece, you’d realize who the persona really was. Hehehe.

It sounds what happened to my goldfish.

OMG , I see the tag now, and get it. Very funny. I’m changing my rating to 5 stars.
I still stick with my previous comment about “am” and “was”, but I’m glad you are not changing it. I respect that you like it the way it is.

i think this gross,, i love it five stars

Yes, it’s gross, but it’s meant to be. Brilliant title.