nice, I like the phrase Meet you at the swingset.

Nice, I like the picture you chose for inspiration also.

cool, and well written. The end really is great, really brings it full circle with the title.

Oh, Laine, this is gorgeous! I often use sunrise/sunset metaphors, and I like the way you used it here.

I think I’m going to have to save this to my clippings.

I love this. It makes me feel bad about the incident where a swing nearly took out my eye. I was 5.