its action packed i do feel like hg wells reading it in reverse though

ok now i went back and read them forward so i am caught up lol

goofy T_RR
Anyway, I like the tension and comedy in this scene!

hey past me should have paid better attention and future me says me from sixteen days ago shouldnt have drank so much lol i wish you had said she stripped to her sports bra and panties

hey then she could of looked queerly at the doctor and he could have replied, “sorry i dont i wear underwear under my space suit it rides up in the rigging, its space you have to get comfortable.” lol just needlin ya

hey maybe you can hire me to write comic relief and sexual tension scenes when you sell the screenplay. hint hint