I left out taste and temperature, but added in Deja-Vu!

I really enjoyed reading this, good luck with the challenge. Though I don’t think you need it.

i really like it ir remindfs me of the trapese scene in wings of desire

My favorite part was the combination sensory attack in the beginning with smell and sound combining with a physical sensation effect. Bonus points for three senses in one moment, even if you did leave out two senses, though I hardly think temperature counts as an omission.

thanks everybody! Maybe the trapeze artist’s mouth was dry before he leaped?? LOL ! I doubt he would even think of temperature during his act… :) I just ran out of room to add them!

Very well written. I enjoyed the initial impressions of the tent as well.