Great use of all the senses to give a complete picture, all the while letting us in on more and more of the situation and back story.

Great use of all the senses to give a complete picture, all the while letting us in on more and more of the situation and back story.

all five senses, plus pain and temperature. I like it! Very good description of a dire situation!

A fine entry. I enjoyed reading it. (Check the spelling of “coughing”, though).