I like that you slipped in the physical senses but really wound up conveying emotional feelings more strongly. Made for a powerful story.

Oh my! Amazing job!!! Good use of the senses, it is like you are really there.
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wow! powerful story! And I’m not just copying THX . It’s very vivid and frightening, written from hindsight for a first hand story-telling feel.

I agree with the above comments – this was a vivid entry. Very strong.

Awesome descriptions…

I can just imagine this kid growing up with a phobia of lightning!