Infatuation at its worst!

Aw man.

I normally don’t like poetry at all, but this just connected with me.

I’ve been in that situation many time myself.

Very nice descriptions and rhythym.

is this about ficlets being down too?

5*s though i like it
@ oreo how can you not like poetry it is like a hooker heroin bana split martini for writers. Poetry is a type of sinful self indulgence that even the devil can get behind, but even though it provides pure exctasy for the poet, it is also orgasmicly edifying to the reader. allen ginsburg’s Kaddish is like having an orgasm, falling in love, standing up too fast, and finding out jesus had a boyfriend named julio, all at the same time. Poetry is what writers bleed.

Fantastic imagery, I especially loved the line about memory’s sharp little teeth. I wonder if it will let me rate it or not? 5 stars (I should be happy it’s letting me read it, much less, comment).