Wow. That’s just evil! The last paragraph is a beauty as far as imagery goes. Brilliant!

Poor Dalton, shouldn’t have messed with Denlow. Nice reptilian description and a deadly calm villain is the scariest.

Nothing to critique here. Good job.

Stunning scene that’s very easy to visualize.

I love how the seeming “protection” of a public place turned out to be a disadvantage.

Wonderful descriptions, and a lovely villain to boot!