Nice rambling little contemplation on fate. I think the trick and the real power to it would be to now tie it to a story of fate, fate denied or accepted.
Fate is elemental, it’s that something you can’t explain even though it happens and you see it happening. I like the concept ficletized. Adding a character or two would be interesting, but don’t over do it, cuz fate itself is a full plate to comprehend. I personally don’t even know if I believe in free will, fate, or both. It’s a subject well worth exploring, Blu.
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Tad Winslow