Man, it is creepy!

Who is this Suzy?

Great job taking a funny, cute ficlet and making it into something completely different.

Fantastic. Bonus points for being the first (and, so far, only) entry in the Old Ficlet Challenge.

it is creepy. I’d leave the roast and go looking for him, but he’s probably hiding.

Very creepy, gives it lots of potential.
One gramatically nit-picky thing in the title: is there more than one queen with lament (queens’) or is just the one queen (queen’s)?

My grammar is correct, but thank you for noticing my subtle point there.

@THX0477:

Glad you liked the sequel. I felt inspired to write because of this installment and its predecessor. You paint a very vivid picture, and I found your use of words to accomplish that exceptional. I particularly liked, in this ficlet, the description of the sunlight coming through the sun catchers and seemingly breaking the laws of physics. Great job. I’d rate you 5 stars, if the ratings were working. I’ll be back when they are.

Months and Months go by, then BAM you sequel yourself. I’m glad you did, otherwise I might never have read the prequel.