I liked the tongue in cheek bumper sticker reference and the bit of a surprise at the end with ‘Now, eat his brains,’ said the voice.

What’s this, Schizophrenia?

Interesting…. Great hanger there. ;)

I like it. Now lets see where it goes.

Schizophrenia is what I was intending. Just a bodiless voice floating around in our protagonist’s head.

This is actually based on a true story of a teenager who killed his father and then ate his brains “so he could always be with me!”

Heh, awesome.