wow, this is very intense, yet very well written. great job!

This is pretty good
Though I don’t care for haiku
I’ll give you five stars.

Love it. 5 stars.

I think you dod a good job, but you should consider longer poetry.

am i the only masochist here? damn oh well… i like this a lot =] p.s. i think i’m the only one who likes haikus as well.

woah! not bad! i like it.