I can perfectly imagine this going on. It goes on inside my house, but only with the roommate replaced with a mother. A very cranky mother…moving on, I think this is a very nice Ficlet, because it doesn’t have a whole load of description, which is rare for you, if I may say so. The conversation is just enough to depict what’s going on. Thanks for entering! : )

I’m a man of few words, but you did this beautifully. I can picture the two girls in their dorm. In fact I think I went thru this same thing with my younger brother. Great job.

Cute ‘life of a writer’ sort of moment, with a nod to ficlets even.