Come on, come on. You got me hooked, get on with it. Actually a very good read, pacing, suspense, anticipation. It’s all there.Good Job.
well, i wrote a sequel, but my computer is acting up so there appears to be four different sequels, when in fact they are all the same one.
and my computer won’t let me get rid of them yet.
what is it crazy you make in me wait !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5.213458126*s to be exact for frustration
Wyatt Aapr
Punkin
Punkin
Mighty-Joe Young