Lovely, very painful. I loved the quiet, subtle transition to sci-fi out of the deeply felt human emotions.
Very nice hook. Leaves us looking for more. Good job.
great story you should make a Sequel
robot love, but very well written! I say “but” not because I don’t like it, but I remember a challenge a while back to do a story like this, it got several entries, and yet if this was written back then, I think you would have won!
Thanks for your comments. :)
“had even showed him her button, with an innocence that took his breath away.” pure genius.
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Wyatt Aapr
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