Interesting read, but consider rating mature for languege. Or perhaps I am just too picky there myself. Anyway, nice job.
Refreshingly realistic, compared to the large body of bad sci-fi out there.
Very interesting and imaginative!
Perhaps you’re too picky? Yeah. Think so.Nice story. I might meditate on a sequel.
Mature for language?I use way worse language on a daily basis :3
Alexis DeHearts
White Hat
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