Interesting use of itlaics. I like the pace of this piece. It reads well and keeps the reader invovled in the story.
That’s what I like so much about these! They’re paced really well! That solves that mystery! But I still don’t know why he was looking at the photos…
That’s what I like so much about these!
They’re paced really well!
That solves that mystery!
But I still don’t know why he was looking at the photos…
Mmm, what kind of past could have taught him to react like that? Must know more.
Punkin
OrangeOreos
RainDance