Very cool!

I loved the old English book vibe from this. I’m pretty sure that was intentional, too!

It sounds just like Jane Austen!

thanks very much, and yes, it was intended.

i like this.

thank you! i’ll be adding the rest in a (probably) very long chain of sequels. the whole version, as it is continued, is also available here-http://funkymchotpants.deviantart.com/art/Fault-and-Frustration-84939970

a free spirited girl…and a great old vibe!

Sounds like a lovely scene, especially with the red hair flowing in the breeze. This could lead to all sorts of trouble.

thank you, thank you! :)