Hey thanx 4 the comment ^^
and uhm,, cool story ha =P

Hmm. My first attempt at a comment didn’t post.

Essentially, you have a lot of spelling errors and grammatical mistakes. But as you say in your profile, you’re working to improve.

I would suggest using a spell checker and then reading your sentences aloud before posting. You might catch some of the more obvious problem areas.

In any case, thank you for participating in the challenge.