Nice choice of words… and I really like the spontaneous turn at the end… keep the good work coming! THUMBS UP

Yep, didn’t see the vampire twist at the end coming. Very sad, and also very much a launching place for more of a story. Or perhaps it’s the end.

Hey! Thanks guys…this was my first “story” in years…I’m glad I still got it :)

five stars. I like how he can see the over-arching consequences of changing her.

I really can’t believe you don’t realize how talented you are. I personally applaud you. Happen to be into the Twilight series by any chance?

this is good shit fangs and everything, my wife always says if you really love someone you would live in a cardboard box with them so whats a little undead between lovers right?