you get a name and a pic too and stop janking krulltars pic by the way the story was good but …… means distraction pause drifting thoughts all the things you cant do with exclamation..
3.87674 stars for good believable dialogue
keep up the good work get a pic and a name

don’t worry about mighty-joe, he’s not really a bully. :) Nice dialogue, next you could expand on those powers!

thanks…