I really like this. Nicely done!

Aww, thankies for the compliment! I felt very creepy as I wrote this…And this song gives me chills everytime I listen, but it’s so darn addicting! I highly recommend that if you like this story, you go ahead and find this song.

It has a creepy sense to it. I like it, well done :-)

Those last two lines fit perfectly. I take it they were lyrics? The woman’s voice seems like she’s reminiscing, almost possessed by the ghost. It’s creepy, and very well done!