Oh my god, I was literally laughing out loud about this!
Tell her you’re one of those ‘Make a Wish’ kids. She might let you touch her boobies.
Haha, this is hilarious :] very well written.
I need some advice on how not to use “was” so much when describing. Let me know if you have tips.

Ficlets, won’t let me rate so
FIVE STARS

I agree with Freedom, a very funny narative. And also with Freedom, i have trouble using was and were. Shoot, that’s what editors are for.

ooops! it’s best to think back to your narrator, :) This was a relatable piece for me, as i get caught “talking” to myself sometimes..

Just so long as your narrator isn’t Emma Thompson…

Haha out loud for this one, and a definite loud giggle for BARomero’s contribution :-D

FIVE STARS from me too