Interesting, there is a lot here hooking the reader in, lots of details that desire to be filled in… I’m looking forward to a sequel!

Good job. Good hook. Well done.

Well written. Hoping for a sequel.

Thanks, all of you, for your very kind comments. I have to be honest I almost never sequel my own stuff (I’ve done it once and that was a planned story told from two perspectives, one after the other). Seeing as this site is in part about collaboration, why don’t y’all sequel this one? I would love to see what you guys might come up with in that regard.