Great. It gives Mandy an air of indifference.
There is something very honest and daring about your writing, Saint Chuck. Another great opener… Fun, entertaining, and above all – very interesting.
It’s pretty good. I do like Mandy’s seeming indifference.
Very good actually. Mandy’s reasoning is unconventional, and unexpected, but shows how everyone does not work as one huge body at times.
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