oh my gosh!

omg. seriously? what’s going to happen next?! oh man. i can’t wait!

oh wow, what next??

Oh wow! Great way to continue. Thanks for continuing the story!

sexy! LOL …. very good description, etc. I like it..

ahh! not good!!!

Beautiful and tantalizing, then unexpectedly ominous in the last line. Awesome sequel.

DUN , DUN, DUN !!! she drowned…or did she?…lol! good continuation. fits in greatly

love the description of susan! gorgeous! OH my god. so going on to the next coninuation here! xo

Oh man I hope she didn’t drown. I think she’s just continuing to tease him by staying under for so long. Great sequel btw.