Ooh…feeling the deep hatred right now…not for you, for Eve. I can’t see how anyone could be any more heartless – congratulations, you made me hate a fictional character. XD Great entry, though. : )

Wow.. that’s pretty evil … awesome ficlet…

very evil. i have a son whose autistic, so i reallly hate this villian. good writing. 5 stars

thanks for the compliments! it was extremely hard for me to kill david. even though i tried to give myself enough time to become attached to him, i found myself hating the monster i created to the act.

ha..that should say “tried not to give myself enough time to become attached”

Consider Eve deeply hated. That’s brilliance right there.
Thanks for entering!