Haha
this has a mix of comedy and a serious touch that it would be hard to classify in a genre.
Which to me means that this is a unique piece of writing. Not many people can write like this anymore. So many people bend to a certain genre but never take the time nor thoughts to make up their own.
5 stars

HAHAHAHA … that’s awesome.. that was… heeeerrrrrrlarious!

Nothing like a great OCD drunk dude.
Great entry. Very funny!
Thanks for playing!!!

My favorite exchange:

“Your story, your story. Tell me in your own words.â€?
“That’s dumb. Who’s other words would I use?â€?

And you mentioned Elsha—so you got the bonus points..! woOt

Sorry.. not OCD drunk.. more like ADD drunk dude.

awesome! this was hilarious! Great dialogue, and crazy story! I’m still laughing!!

Only a couple of six packs! What’s that gonna do? And I agree with Living In Wonder Land. It’s cool how this doesn’t fit any sort of stereotype.