Well, for saying I have a lot of mistakes so do you. I will actually point them out to you. ExcitEment, it is gently not gentley, and no comma in that beginning it just seperates it weird. I will give you that even though I haven’t read the series I got very into this as it went on. If I could rate I would give you a five but the rating doesn’t work. You have a lot to learn about the community called ficlets.
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Thank you Blusparrow. If I can hand it out I can take it. I also agree that the community of ficlets is unique and I have asked questions of the members before I was inducted into LoA

congrats on your induction! and Archibald seems an intelligent fellow, I think he’ll figure it out! :)