Good questions.
I might sequel tonight.

OMG , don’t you read what you’ve written before you publish it? I suggest you do so. Read it word for word. Lots wrong with this one.

wow… that is harsh…. Yes I do and I do a Word spell check.
LoA

whoa whoa whoa.
hey.
Wyatt—no disrespect. ever. not on this site. critisism is fantastic shizz, but seriously, that was too much. hop into a freezer and chill, dude.

yeah seriously calm down!
anywhoo. This is a typical day in my life lol. The whole asking myself a million questions for no apparent reason…yup that’s me alright.

Yeah, that is a bit harsh; it’s the delivery. But yeah, I would maybe just take a peek at some of the spellings.
Other than that, you played out the internal struggle quite nicely. Well done!

I agree with g2, couple spelling errors and otherwise it’s perfect. Anyone would have that same silent struggle when it came to that. Well, not me though. I’d be talking to myself. XD