wow you really a detective huh? no more csi for you young lady.

i like the pun in the title too you should get bonus points for that

Very cool.

You can almost sense her excitement at the discovery, and how she’s speaking and making connections in her brain at the same time.

very nice detective work! now somebody swab that guitar!

Yeah, seriously! Can I have the name of the guitar shop, too? If I ever take up guitar, I want to make sure I don’t buy anything from this guy!

That’s very Sherlock-ian of your character to be so headstrong & sure!
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inventive! that was entertaining and witty. Nice!

that was quite the story NIGHTMAIDEN ! By the way I love your name..
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(the first comment was X-Ninja, my counter part)