Just finished reading the whole thread. I do think it’s rough in spots, but I like it. I know what I’d put in the sequel, but I won’t write it yet because I’d rather see what you’re going to do next with it.

I love how Alex loves her so much to wonder if something is wrong. He’s a sweetie. Haha, I wonder how that math project is going to go.

And cloister, I have to ask you to please not sequel because this is the first series between me and RainDance.

Thanks cloister :]