well, that settles that! I guess he doesn’t have to choose, which is good, but it must feel like a breakup! And that’s sad.

I agree with Elsha. Pretty clean cut story – concise and in tune with the beginning. War does that to many people…in class, we learned about the Vietnam Syndrome…needless to say I was in a morose mood for days after. Thanks for entering! : )

Not sure what to make of it. The style has a different feel than your usual stuff. There’s almost a tongue-in-cheek feel to it…like there’s a pun I’m not getting or something.